英文求职信时要注意以下四个方面：
一、在语言风格上要平实、简洁。切忌用夸张、比喻的手法引起误解，而要给招聘者留下诚恳、务实的印象。招聘者也没有时间阅读过长的信件，所以整篇书信要简短，能控制在一页16开纸上为最好。
二、在句子结构上要多用长句。长句善于表达复杂事物，一方面有利于准确表达求职者的意图，容易给招聘者留下思维条理清晰，逻辑性强的印象;另一方面，将大量信息融合到一个句子中，很容易抓住招聘者的注意力，迫使其一口气读完，从而留下深刻印象。
三、从语气上，求职信应写得诚恳而积极，表达出自己对该单位的向往之情。切忌傲慢或过于自谦。
四、从内容上看，英文求职信一般要包括七个步骤：
1. introducing candidate (介绍候选身份)。在这一部分中，求职者要介绍自己的求职意向和个人情况，包括受教育、专业、工作履历等方面的情况。
2. establishing credential (确定任职凭证) 在这部分，求职者要表明自己为什么和凭什么选择这份工作，即自己的专业或目前从事的工作类型。
3. offering incentives (鼓励接受申请)这一步是招聘者能否给应聘者面试机会的关键。应聘者可以从能力、经验、个人专长、性格优势等各方面进行阐述，鼓励招聘者给自己一个面试的机会。
4. enclosing document (提及附加材料)。应聘往往会被要求或自愿随信附加一些证明文件，比如各种证书和近期照片。最好再附上一个已写好的回邮信封。以便尽快得到回音。
5. using pressure tactics(采用施压策略)这是为了获得面试机会而使用的手段。但这一步对求职者的要求很高，必须对自己的实力有充分的自信，还要了解招聘者的薄弱环节在什么地方，才能积极有效的施加压力。否者这种手段的效果只能适得其反。
6. soliciting response(请求答复)
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Mobile:
Distinguished leadership:
Hello! thank you for your sincere in his busy schedule, i read this material, and wish your organization the cause of prosperity and bright future!
I studied public enterprise management, but the comparison is more like hotel management. into the community, i have just come into contact with the hotel management was deeply attracted to after work in the hotel industry, continue to draw the relevant work experience, has accumulated a certain amount of hotel management experience, i found that this is what i want to do the. Although lu buping more rugged, but after all, to find love and is therefore suitable for their work is not easy. So i was very lucky.
Hotel is to bring people comfort and pleasure, the kind of environment and atmosphere that i long for, and engaged in the provision of all the hotel management will be proud and satisfied. The hotel industry is a dynamic and promising sector, especially in the domestic hotel high-speed growth of foreign investment into china one after another hotel, the hotel industry to make more full of opportunities and challenges. I am determined to put its own hotel management as a career to do, so your corporate job candidates, in the hope that the industry has a very good development.
Since the hotel has chosen me to endure hardship to do a good job of preparation, you want to start from the grass-roots level, the hotel itself with the continuous development may be raised step by step.
Thank you for reading this letter and consider my request candidates, and hope to have the honor to interview you, look forward to your response!
尊敬的领导：
您好!衷心的感谢您在百忙之中翻阅我的这份材料，并祝愿贵单位事业欣欣向荣，蒸蒸日上!
我学的是工企管理专业，但比较而言更喜欢酒店管理。进入社会期间，我刚刚接触到酒店管理就被深深的吸引，之后就在酒店业工作，不断的吸取相关的工作经验，经累积具有了一定的酒店管理经验，我发现这就是我想要做的。虽然路不平多崎岖，但是毕竟找到喜欢而又适合自己的工作很不容易。所以我还是很幸运的。
酒店是带给人舒适和愉悦的地方，那种环境和氛围是我所向往的，而从事提供这一切的酒店管理工作更会让人感到骄傲和满足。酒店业是一个充满活力而且很有前景的行业，尤其是国内酒店高速增长，外资酒店纷纷进入中国，更使酒店业充满机遇与挑战。我决心把酒店管理作为自己的事业来做，因此应聘贵公司管理岗位，希望在这个行业有很好的发展。
既然选择了酒店,我就做好了吃苦的准备，希望在贵公司从基层做起，使自己随着酒店的不断发展一步步得到提升。
感谢您阅读此信并考虑我的应聘要求，希望能够有幸与您面谈，衷心期盼您的回复!
7. ending politely(礼貌收尾)